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Patrick L. Parker's avatar

That was pretty great! I like the detail and the forward momentum. It reminds me for some reason of Lennigen (sp) vs the ants.

teej's avatar

thanks a bunch, it was my first time trying to create a world for the story to exist in. I’ve never heard of that story but I’ll definitely check it out.

Patrick L. Parker's avatar

The ants is really not a lot like your story. But something reminded me of it.

https://www.classicshorts.com/stories/lvta.html